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Upstairs, up there, beyond the great divide there is a wide expanse 
Outside our solar system above the sky , fifteen beautiful planets 
and an amphitheater filled with angels singing to the Universe 
Upstairs, up there, there are souls, watching over us in every way   

the upper room is full of love and Spirits rooting for our success 
journeying aside us they glide in and out of our peripheral vision 
 appearing like great orbs of light, all full of warmth and bounce 
the upper room is full of listeners,  that hear us when we cry , 

above us there are so many stars and one blessed moon of blue 
and then we have the sun who always knows when, as if on cue 
upstairs, up there, beyond the spectrum of our sweet imagination 
is a reality more real then anything we ever experienced on earth 

Let us choose to believe and suspend our disbelief long enough 
to give miracles a chance. Again, I hope , if you get the chance, 
I hope you dance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/10/2021 6:23:00 AM
Amen to that. Beautifully expressed. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 4/9/2021 4:34:00 PM
Suspended disbelief to give miracles a chance Here , here Yes please
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Date: 4/8/2021 4:22:00 PM
This is beautiful writing, Mystic Rose Rose. I think most everyone would like to believe this is what it will be like after we leave this vale of tears. Who knows? Here or there--I hope you dance!!!
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Date: 4/9/2021 3:28:00 PM
I'm planning on a few more steps here before I go dance there, if God sees fit to answer my wishes , thankyou for visiting me, stay healthy and prosper .
Date: 4/8/2021 4:13:00 PM
Your stellar vision waltzes in this poem my friend. Loved the upbeat exploration--kudos to your imagination. There is a world up there that is indeed a miracle.
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Date: 4/9/2021 3:28:00 PM
Its me longing to put on my dancing shoes once again, I miss my karaoke group on Friday nights, lol, I hope one day we can go back safely. Thank you for stopping by Vijay, :)

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