Get Your Premium Membership

I Hope, If Nothing Else

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Edward Ibeh.


Should anyone hurt you with cruel words or deeds And there is no one to lean on for comfort I hope, if nothing else... You seek refuge in my outstretched arms And feel the cozy warmth of my caress Should the North Star mislead you as you follow it Faithfully, and you eventually end up lost I hope, if nothing else... Adiona guides you from the dusty road Of nowhere to your desired destination, or back home Should we depart the shallows, and the ebb and flow Of the tide erase our footprints by the edge of the shore I hope, if nothing else... The cauldron of memories we left there Keep boiling over for eternity Should you fail once, twice or many times Like Sisyphus pushing a boulder up the mountaintop I hope, if nothing else... You keep trying, again and again Though he never could, you eventually will Date written: 10/12/2018 Mythological references: Adiona is the Roman Goddess of safe return In Greek mythology, Sisyphus or Sisyphos (/'s?s?f?s/; Greek: S?s?f??, Sísuphos) was the king of Ephyra (now known as Corinth). He was punished for his self-aggrandizing craftiness and deceitfulness by being forced to roll an immense boulder up a hill only for it to roll down when it nears the top, repeating this action for eternity. -Wikipedia: The Free Encyclopedia

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/3/2022 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations Edward on your win. Wonderfully presented piece of art. Neva
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/3/2022 11:11:00 AM
Thank you very much, Neva:-)
Date: 4/21/2019 3:46:00 PM
AWesome choice in the marathon . A very well crafted poem, Edward! Congrats to you.
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/22/2019 1:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-)
Date: 4/20/2019 11:24:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Edward. Well done.
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/21/2019 7:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line:-)
Date: 4/20/2019 4:55:00 PM
Edward, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest has finally come to its end. Congratulations on placing 30th overall in the marathon! There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. Your participation in my contests is much appreciated. ~Mark
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/20/2019 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Mark:-) Much obliged.
Date: 12/26/2018 7:51:00 PM
Such a lovely, well-written poem, Edward! Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/26/2018 7:56:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 12/26/2018 4:29:00 PM
VERY nicely done and nicely WON, Edward. A hearty congratulations in the contest for your win.
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/26/2018 5:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea!:-) I appreciate it
Date: 12/26/2018 3:37:00 PM
Edward, congrats on your win on mile 3 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. This is a brilliantly beautiful poem! ~Mark
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/26/2018 4:13:00 PM
Thank you very much for placing me, Mark!:-) I'm honored.
Date: 12/26/2018 3:20:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! BEAUTIFUL! Janice
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/26/2018 4:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice!:-)
Date: 10/22/2018 4:42:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Edward. Well done.
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/22/2018 7:50:00 PM
Thank you for your continuous support, Line!. It means a lot to me.
Date: 10/19/2018 10:17:00 AM
Congrats Edward on your win in Brian's contest!
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/19/2018 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, L.J.!:-) I appreciate it...
Date: 10/18/2018 7:06:00 PM
Nicely done, Edward - congratulations on your win in Brian's contest - blessings, and "write on", my friend! :-)
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/19/2018 12:12:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Gregory!:-) Coming from one of my favorite PS poets, that means a lot!

Book: Shattered Sighs