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I Hope, If Nothing Else

Should anyone hurt you with cruel words or deeds
And there is no one to lean on for comfort

I hope, if nothing else...
You seek refuge in my outstretched arms
And feel the cozy warmth of my caress

Should the North Star mislead you as you follow it 
Faithfully, and you eventually end up lost  

I hope, if nothing else...
Adiona guides you from the dusty road
Of nowhere to your desired destination, or back home

Should we depart the shallows, and the ebb and flow
Of the tide erase our footprints by the edge of the shore

I hope, if nothing else...
The cauldron of memories we left there 
Keep boiling over for eternity
 
Should you fail once, twice or many times
Like Sisyphus pushing a boulder up the mountaintop

I hope, if nothing else...
You keep trying, again and again
Though he never could, you eventually will



Date written: 10/12/2018





Mythological references:
Adiona is the Roman Goddess of safe return
In Greek mythology, Sisyphus or Sisyphos (/'s?s?f?s/; Greek: S?s?f??, Sísuphos) was the king of Ephyra (now known as Corinth). He was punished for his self-aggrandizing craftiness and deceitfulness by being forced to roll an immense boulder up a hill only for it to roll down when it nears the top, repeating this action for eternity.


-Wikipedia: The Free Encyclopedia
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Romaine Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations Edward on your win. Wonderfully presented piece of art. Neva
Ibeh Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 11:11 AM
Thank you very much, Neva:-)
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:46 PM
AWesome choice in the marathon . A very well crafted poem, Edward! Congrats to you.
Ibeh Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-)
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 11:24 PM
Back with more congrats, Edward. Well done.
Ibeh Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 7:35 AM
Thank you so much, Line:-)
Toney Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 4:55 PM
Edward, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest has finally come to its end. Congratulations on placing 30th overall in the marathon! There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. Your participation in my contests is much appreciated. ~Mark
Ibeh Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 6:52 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Mark:-) Much obliged.
Haight Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 7:51 PM
Such a lovely, well-written poem, Edward! Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
Ibeh Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 7:56 PM
Thank you, Sandra!:-) Most appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 4:29 PM
VERY nicely done and nicely WON, Edward. A hearty congratulations in the contest for your win.
Ibeh Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 5:10 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea!:-) I appreciate it
Toney Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Edward, congrats on your win on mile 3 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. This is a brilliantly beautiful poem! ~Mark
Ibeh Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Thank you very much for placing me, Mark!:-) I'm honored.
Canerdy Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 3:20 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! BEAUTIFUL! Janice
Ibeh Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Thank you so much, Janice!:-)
Gauthier Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 4:42 PM
Congrats on your top win, Edward. Well done.
Ibeh Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Thank you for your continuous support, Line!. It means a lot to me.
Carber Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 10:17 AM
Congrats Edward on your win in Brian's contest!
Ibeh Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 12:28 PM
Thank you, L.J.!:-) I appreciate it...
Barden Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 7:06 PM
Nicely done, Edward - congratulations on your win in Brian's contest - blessings, and "write on", my friend! :-)
Ibeh Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 12:12 AM
Thank you so very much, Gregory!:-) Coming from one of my favorite PS poets, that means a lot!
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