I Hold You Dear

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A ray of sunlight has pierced The blackest umbra of twilight that once Cloaked me. I suddenly remember The gleam in your smile The sparkle in your eyes Out of sight, but in my mind I hold you dear and near, my love For you've indelibly traced your name On my yearning, desolate heart With your healing fingertips COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(23) any theme any form contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date written and posted: 05/29/2019

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 10/10/2020 2:49:00 PM

Felicitations on your write of such tender memories. So good to have had someone who inspires such encouragement and support even in their absence. Great write, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/10/2020 4:39:00 PM

Thanks so much for the kind comments and visit, Reason A.!:-)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/10/2020 12:03:00 PM

Oh, this is such a beautiful and moving poem, Edward. Your tender artistry shines. Lovely emotion and imagery. Congratulations on your excellent win.. ~Susan

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/10/2020 2:05:00 PM

Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and congrats, Susan:-) I really appreciate it!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/10/2020 7:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "A wonderful write". Yes, you are so right with your sign. The best things about memories is making them. Enjoy your win and weekend...................

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/10/2020 9:32:00 AM

Thanks for the comments and congrats, Paula:-) Enjoy your weekend as well!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/10/2020 6:55:00 AM

A poignant, beautiful, WINNING poem, Edward! Janice

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/10/2020 9:30:00 AM

Thank you so much, Janice:-)