I Helped Myself Up

Oh long lost forlorn has left me;
stranded,
forgotten,
left amongst the dying rocks.

...I help myself up.

I climb a cliff, the rocks biting,
feasting upon my flowing blood;
incision-
upon incision-

...I help myself up.

Gripping earth with nails untrimmed,
gritting at the pain within,
seeking redemption in the eyes of fate,
straining forth in wasted state;
exhausted;
famished;
unsure of my own future-

...I help myself up.

Escaping vertigo, my legs descend to ground once more;
firm ground with mellow grass, scrunching beneath my very steps;
I lift my gaze to what's in store,
in the very bottom of my core,
standing my ground where I should've fallen;
I turn my head-

...to where I helped myself up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 25, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Inspiring poem, Michael! Sometimes you need to lift yourself up to get stronger and learn from your fall. Kisses, Emily
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June 24, 2010 at 11:03 AM
There are so many amazing poems written and posted everyday here at PoetrySoup. The poets here grow with each poem they write. It is a pleasure to read them and I am so happy yours is among them today Michael. Love, Carol
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June 23, 2010 at 9:22 PM
A journey where one must go to find themselves,, a truely interestingly good write,,, loved it!!....P.D.
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June 23, 2010 at 1:36 PM
Nice one Michael...I couldnt stop reading...BG
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June 23, 2010 at 1:28 PM
a lot strain is felt incision incision, gripping earth with nails untrimmed, good imagery. keep helping yourself up! enjoyed
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