I Held You

I HELD YOU


I held you in my arms just
For a second:
An eternity of happiness, in the
Realm of love! 


© Demetrios Trifiatis
     10 MAY 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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De Burca Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 4:41 PM
You have a very romantic soul my friend. Excellent poem, you capture feeling so well.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 5:55 PM
Thank you for your comment. You are so kind!
Gunatillake Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 8:48 AM
A Poet is naturally romantic. And you are a poet! Superb. I like the phrase " an eternity of happiness" love manel
Trifiatis Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 8:53 AM
Thank you Manel for your comment and for calling me a poet!
Manassian Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 8:28 AM
This is beyond superb! A seven from me, my dear poet. Katapliktikos....opos kai on anthropos o opios egrapse to! Alethia sou lao!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 8:52 AM
Thank you for your kind words! Thank you!
Sivey Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 6:08 AM
This is so very beautiful, a gorgeous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! You have painted a glorious image, one that I was able to visualize with ease! What a powerful and loving piece here Demetrios, I truly loved it! Great Work!!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 6:16 AM
Thank you for your good words! I know you understand that, for you are so sensitive!
Andresen Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 4:27 AM
- Beautiful - romantic, Demetrios! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 5:14 AM
Thank you my friend! xoxox
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