I Have To Kill Him

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Seek and Destroy He mocks me The last laugh shall belong to me The clown will die a horrible death Silence of the lambs no more Seeking solace I take hold Of the evils ones thoughts Growing old I shall take my revenge till the end He shall taunt me no more I have planned his murder of gore Blood shall surely flow He shall regret ever knowing the likes of me It is all about me, me, stop taunting me Head in hands screams from another dark land I can’t take it any more Smashing my hammer, bang bang bang The mirror exists no longer He is gone

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Shirley Rebstock

Date: 6/5/2017 4:58:00 PM

Reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe. You are very creative and imaginative

Joseph May

Date: 5/28/2017 8:47:00 PM

These dark images exist in the mirror of the mind and in nightmares too...Nicely penned arthur

Jean Murray

Date: 5/28/2017 12:13:00 AM

That's weird. I mentioned your magic mirror just now before seeing this poem.

Niall Fulham

Date: 5/27/2017 4:53:00 PM

Hi Arthur , interesting write , sounds like someone mental health issues demons inside very enjoyable read :)))

Tim Smith

Date: 5/24/2017 10:19:00 PM

You scared me...it's all about perception

Lin Lane

Date: 5/24/2017 5:14:00 AM

This bears witness to the cliché of being our own worst enemy. Titch of a "whoa" ending. Well written.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/24/2017 2:17:00 AM

We must look in the same mirror my friend - this would have been an awesome idea for the contest lol:-) Sure can relate to your lines lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Carol B.

Date: 5/23/2017 11:34:00 PM

I can relate lol. The mirror sometimes can be cruel. I can't believe who looks back at me. I am in denial about my age.