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I Have Tears I Want To Cry

I have tears I want to cry, But my eyes will not let me I have things I want to say, But I know you will not hear. There are things I wish to bear, Yet I know nobody will care, I look for some way to leave Yet no door appears to be opening.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/6/2018 11:59:00 AM
This is a deep piece and it struggles with the feeling of helplessness and uncertainty in life. The rhythm and story line are perfect, flowing with a defeated beat that says a lot without much thought. Very well done, Emile.
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Date: 2/5/2018 6:37:00 PM
This is very simple, plain and FANTASTIC. I love it, KUdzai.
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Kudzai Mhangwa
Date: 2/6/2018 9:48:00 AM
Thank you a lot Andrea!
Date: 2/5/2018 5:12:00 PM
nice write Kudzai, stuck but needing to go, just stuck
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Kudzai Mhangwa
Date: 2/6/2018 9:48:00 AM
Yeah, I do feel a bit stuck, but what can I do? Nice to hear from you my friend
Date: 2/5/2018 12:14:00 PM
I like it... " for now you'll just have to bear it..." I like the vibe...All the best Kudzai
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Kudzai Mhangwa
Date: 2/6/2018 9:49:00 AM
Thank you a lot Arturo!
Date: 2/5/2018 11:18:00 AM
Very powerful poem my friend..you depicted the emotions well..your words make an impact, Kudzai.
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