Kudzai Mhangwa Poet Quatrain

I Have Tears I Want To Cry

I have tears I want to cry,
But my eyes will not let me
I have things I want to say,
But I know you will not hear.

There are things I wish to bear,
Yet I know nobody will care,
I look for some way to leave
Yet no door appears to be opening.

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Emile Pinet February 6, 2018 at 11:59 AM This is a deep piece and it struggles with the feeling of helplessness and uncertainty in life. The rhythm and story line are perfect, flowing with a defeated beat that says a lot without much thought. Very well done, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich February 5, 2018 at 6:37 PM This is very simple, plain and FANTASTIC. I love it, KUdzai. Kudzai Mhangwa February 6, 2018 at 9:48 AM Thank you a lot Andrea!

Lewis Raynes February 5, 2018 at 5:12 PM nice write Kudzai, stuck but needing to go, just stuck Kudzai Mhangwa February 6, 2018 at 9:48 AM Yeah, I do feel a bit stuck, but what can I do? Nice to hear from you my friend

Arturo Michael February 5, 2018 at 12:14 PM I like it... " for now you'll just have to bear it..." I like the vibe...All the best Kudzai Kudzai Mhangwa February 6, 2018 at 9:49 AM Thank you a lot Arturo!

Vijay Pandit February 5, 2018 at 11:18 AM Very powerful poem my friend..you depicted the emotions well..your words make an impact, Kudzai.