Ravi Sathasivam Poet Light Verse

I Have Stolen Your Heart

I have stolen your heart....

I have stolen your heart without you even know
Now I have you in my soul and not going to let you go
You become my life now without any condition
And my hands will hold around your neck with affections
My heart is longing for your love which can be found nowhere.
There is a special place for you in my heart 
where I only can touch it and feel the rhythm
The moon never beams without loving your heart
either the stars cannot twinkle without seeing your eyes
You light up my world and make my heart so proud
but bring me tears in the nights without you being close to me
There is no life without love and there is no love without you
Even every memory of yours holds me as treasure
and every thought brings you close to my heart
Not only I have stolen your heart 
but also I have release my soul deep with your love 

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Liam Mcdaid September 8, 2014 at 5:55 PM excellent piece very beautifully painted Ravi Sathasivam September 9, 2014 at 6:35 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2014 at 5:54 PM This is very sweet, Ravi. I have one little suggestion to improve one line. Don't say wrap your hands around the neck. Just say your "arms"around a person's shoulders, or even neck, but hands around the neck sounds like you want to choke someone! Ravi Sathasivam September 9, 2014 at 6:37 AM Thanks for your comment my poem Andrea. Appreciated. Thanks again for your suggestion to improve on my work. It will be done as you have said it. Love and Hugs.xxxRavi

Christine Costello September 8, 2014 at 8:33 AM A beautiful love story I much enjoyed. :-) Christine Ravi Sathasivam September 9, 2014 at 6:37 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated

Tim Smith September 8, 2014 at 8:07 AM To release your soul...how beautiful...... Tim Ravi Sathasivam September 9, 2014 at 6:38 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated

Sara Kendrick September 8, 2014 at 7:07 AM Ahh!!! Passionate work..Enjoyed reading your love story..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2014 at 5:56 AM - When you want something with all your heart and soul ....- It always gives a positive force - Beautiful poem my friend, Ravi - Have a nice new week with love :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Ravi Sathasivam September 9, 2014 at 6:38 AM Thanks for your comment Anne. Appreciated. Love and hugs xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis September 8, 2014 at 5:29 AM With such beauty and intensity of feelings only a winner in the battlefield of love you will be dear Ravi! Ravi Sathasivam September 9, 2014 at 6:38 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen September 8, 2014 at 4:23 AM Really you did it! A good poem to read Siva! Ravi Sathasivam September 8, 2014 at 4:48 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated. Ravi