I Have Seen the Feelings of Love

I have seen the feelings of Love


I have seen the feelings of Love I have seen the feelings of love Lurching from the eyes When the winds of March Began to touch The inner core of heart. When the smell of Mango flowers Get mixed with the changing season And it began to flash On our mind and heart In its most enchanting form On every living creatures. The colors of the feelings of love And its shades are not different When it touches the human heart And it began to show its wonders Forgetting the age, places and path When this smell spreads The joy of love began to ooze Spreading its intoxication And the heart finds it difficult To live without inhaling The spreading fragrance in the air. Ravindra Kanpur India 15th April 2013..... to be concluded in next
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Makama Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 12:51 PM
This is beautiful and nicely crafted. Thanks for the share... Sometimes its refreshing visiting old poems of soupers... Its amazing, the freshness which comes from doing this... And that is exactly my enjoyment visiting this piece
Lamoureux Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 9:33 AM
I especially enjoyed the last stanza " And the hearts finds it difficult to live without inhaling the spreading fragrance in the air." please consider changing hearts to heart, it would make it even more personal.
Kapoor Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Thanks Richard for pointing the unnoticed error. With best wishes.
Knapp Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 7:18 AM
Ravindra ~ My Friend, Such beauty and feeling's you have spoken of. I could see myself in the middle of your wonderful, tropical forrest of love! Thank you also for stopping by mine. Your Friend, Debbie.
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 9:00 AM
Very expressive and passionate work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Kearley Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 10:47 PM
Very nice! A very soothing read. I will have to read some more of your fine writes.
Swaminathan Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 2:09 AM
you feel love you sense love, you see love but you cannot tie it up, profound write, enjoyed sir
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April 15, 2013 at 8:40 PM
Thank you Ravindra, for expressing the vision you have engaged when it comes to love.... I have missed you. I haven't been away, but I find it hard to express myself to the many poets that care about me. I am happy I'd seen your poem on the soup today. This will help me get back to a few of your older poems during the week. It is always an honor in reading your work.. always~ POET D
Kapoor Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 11:10 PM
Thanks my friend for precious words. I have missed a lot of your excellent Poems, so I will start from some of your earlier works first. Hope you are keeping fine PD. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra
Hendricks Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 7:34 PM
Ooooh, expressive poetry. I can't wait for the second edition. Lovely writing, Ravindra. :)
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April 15, 2013 at 10:11 AM
Member, CONGRATS ON THE MEMBERSHIP RENEWAL! It was a pleasure reading this poem, too.
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