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I Have Optimistic Ideas

I will win this race I think forgetting that my body does not run. I will dance my jeans off I believe forgetting I have a torn meniscus. I will do a double triple quadruple skate move at the Olympics I brag. My ankles groan, they are filled with arthritis now. I will climb that mountain so high! My lungs laugh, reminding me of our asthma I will win all the marathons in the continental USA Unless this frumpy dumpy flesh body holds me back.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/29/2022 6:49:00 AM

Hello Caren, yes this is being optimistic. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/29/2022 9:43:00 AM

Hello Caren, you are welcome . Hugs.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/29/2022 8:42:00 AM

Thank you Darlene

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2022 9:22:00 PM

you are that little ant with high high hopes. Cute one, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/29/2022 8:42:00 AM

Thanks for using the word LITTLE Andrea

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/28/2022 9:05:00 PM

(smiling) Oh, Caren, how I can relate to this poem. Many times, when the barometric pressure is falling, my hips and knee hurts so badly I can hardly stand it. Today has been such a day. But, I can still type. And, I can still think positive thoughts. The brain is in good shape!!!! (smiling more) Yours is, too!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/29/2022 8:42:00 AM

I try to always be optimistic knowing how important it is