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I Have Fallen

I never saw the stars before.. I walked with a chip and a inner fear of heartache.. Then I fell, I fell so hard.. I couldn't stand without you.. Because I have fallen in love with you...

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Shaz Cheesman

Date: 10/16/2012 12:16:00 AM

WOW - we all want some of what you got LOL. - Shaz

Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/20/2012 9:06:00 PM

I love this ;}

Chris Lane

Date: 8/19/2012 10:02:00 PM

Good write! It happens to us all...

Doreen Wright

Date: 8/12/2012 11:37:00 PM

That is exactly the way it happens too. Great write here Michael, I can relate :-)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/12/2012 8:40:00 AM

Great reason to fall Michael; doesn't get any better than this!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2012 6:59:00 PM

awee..pd

Anne P. Murray

Date: 8/11/2012 5:54:00 PM

I love the formation...like falling down the stairs in love. Great job Michael

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/11/2012 4:43:00 PM

men can be romantic. Nice way to end the day.

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/11/2012 1:52:00 PM

hello MJF, you sure have fallen hey? Absolutely love the feel you create with this gem of yours.. Enjoyed this ;) love & hugs CTH

Cory Long

Date: 8/11/2012 12:01:00 PM

this was beautifully written.. You paint such a strong picture of love cory

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/11/2012 7:08:00 AM

This is how I felt with my wife when we first met Michael, you have pictured it for me perfectly my friend! What a romantic write, I just love it a lot! This visual is so perfect, it paints a perfect graphic of someone falling, especially with the "I's" within it! This is such a grandiose piece, wonderfully put together! Great Work!!

Jennifer Spase

Date: 8/11/2012 6:14:00 AM

lovely powerful and emotional

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/11/2012 6:12:00 AM

Ohhhh.....so sweet Michael, love you to !!!! :) oxox // Anne-Lise <3