Michael J. Falotico Poet Light Verse

I Have Fallen

I never
          saw the
                      stars
                             before.. 
                                       I
                                       walked
                                       with a chip and a
                                       inner fear of heartache..
                                                     Then
                                                        I
                                                      fell,
                                                        I
                                                fell so hard..
                                                        I
                                       couldn't stand without
                                                     you..
                                                  Because
                                  I have fallen in love with you...

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Shaz Cheesman October 16, 2012 at 12:16 AM WOW - we all want some of what you got LOL. - Shaz

Debbie Duncan August 20, 2012 at 9:06 PM I love this ;}

Chris Lane August 19, 2012 at 10:02 PM Good write! It happens to us all...

Doreen Wright August 12, 2012 at 11:37 PM That is exactly the way it happens too. Great write here Michael, I can relate :-)

Elizabeth Wesley August 12, 2012 at 8:40 AM Great reason to fall Michael; doesn't get any better than this!

Poet Destroyer A August 11, 2012 at 6:59 PM awee..pd

Anne P. Murray August 11, 2012 at 5:54 PM I love the formation...like falling down the stairs in love. Great job Michael

Joann Grisetti August 11, 2012 at 4:43 PM men can be romantic. Nice way to end the day.

Wilma Neels August 11, 2012 at 1:52 PM hello MJF, you sure have fallen hey? Absolutely love the feel you create with this gem of yours.. Enjoyed this ;) love & hugs CTH

Cory Long August 11, 2012 at 12:01 PM this was beautifully written.. You paint such a strong picture of love cory

Russell Sivey August 11, 2012 at 7:08 AM This is how I felt with my wife when we first met Michael, you have pictured it for me perfectly my friend! What a romantic write, I just love it a lot! This visual is so perfect, it paints a perfect graphic of someone falling, especially with the "I's" within it! This is such a grandiose piece, wonderfully put together! Great Work!!

Jennifer Spase August 11, 2012 at 6:14 AM lovely powerful and emotional

Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2012 at 6:12 AM Ohhhh.....so sweet Michael, love you to !!!! :) oxox // Anne-Lise <3