I Have Died So Long Ago

I have died so long ago.
The pieces of my bones were buried in Sheol.
It was so dark where I lay now.
My flesh is rotten and almost gone.
I have lived once in this world,
Where a loving family I was involved.
A dearest mom who loved me so,
Loving siblings I treasured most!
I'm a free-spirited young lady.
I love to entertain the world,
Wind hums as I hit the notes.
The nature  became my hidden world.
I was once  a fruit in a tree.
Until one day, a harvester picked me.
Still unripe, too young and fresh.
He stole my innocence.
Too many years past and my seed grew.
I have started bearring fruits.
But the harvester did not content, 
He pulled me out from where I'd been.
He murdered me on one darkest night.
Then buried me beneath the ground.
I'm so helpless, no voice to shout!
My breath is counting one by one.
Until I surrendered the last air in my lungs.
I have died so long ago.
This girl that you used to know,
Isn't the one who writes a poem.
She had died so long ago.
She walks every night to find her home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/24/2017 10:06:00 PM
Oh my goodness that was BEYOND profound I got tears burning in my eyes the passionate pain so extremely relevant and heavy. Great job squeezing every ounce of emotion into this and still having so much left over. Thank you.
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Date: 6/16/2015 4:18:00 PM
Nice one dear
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Date: 11/4/2014 6:25:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem, I wish I could make some someday. I love it :)
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Date: 5/10/2014 12:29:00 AM
This poem touches me so much.. It reaches to the deepest part of my soul.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/12/2014 10:44:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Doris.. you are so swweet!!! :O))
Date: 5/8/2014 9:54:00 PM
Oh! Aiyah you are such a sweet beautiful young lady and those words really touched me so much, in fact I had tears in my eyes as I was reading, so terribly sad, I do hope you don't dwell on things like that, be happy my girl, you have written it so well, now you take care of yourself............Vera.............
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/9/2014 7:30:00 AM
Oh Sorry ,Very if I made you cry... I didn't intend to put your day into sadness... You are one kind-hearted person that I adore so much. I thank you and Peter for being like a second parents to me... Though we're so far away from each other, I can deeply feel the love and concern from your comments... Thanks a lot!!! ..I wanna hug you tight... XOXOXOXOX.. Keep safe all the time... :O))
Date: 5/8/2014 7:30:00 AM
Oh my dear sweet AiyaH! I so wish I could alleviate the pain in your heart, to give you a big hug! This deep heartfelt write has touched my soul! We are all with you, dear heart... loving hugs, Jack XOXOXOX
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/8/2014 8:25:00 AM
Oh my dearest Jack... you are so sweet!! .. You are like a second dad for me.. Thank you for this thoughtful words... I treasure it!!! :O)) xoxoxo
Date: 5/8/2014 5:42:00 AM
So how do I do soupmail?. I had written the following one just before reading this great one. It is called was worth saving but you will have to go to my site to read it. Do not have enough room here. Diego Cuerno de Vaca That is all I remember from my Spanish Class. I am in Bolivia, NC and my email address is jthorn5656@atmc.net
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Date: 5/7/2014 6:56:00 PM
Your heart is starting to beat again my love. The soup has breathed life into a once dying soul....Your brightness shines through your words and are loved by so many....hugs Tim
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/8/2014 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Mr. Smith for this wonderful message... and thank you for letting me know that I am not alone... I'm so happy that I had found this site...:O))
Date: 5/7/2014 6:38:00 PM
OhMy dear THIS IS TERRIFIC to read.. its like a movie.. wonderful writing.. just amazing.. I do love it.. blessings
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/8/2014 7:26:00 AM
Brooke.. you are so lovely my dear friend...!!! Thank you for this wonderful message.. :O))
Date: 5/7/2014 6:26:00 PM
I love Ghost stories and this one is very effective.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/8/2014 7:24:00 AM
Thank you, Rick!!! ...Glad that you liked my ghost... ^_^
Date: 5/7/2014 5:03:00 PM
Wish I knew what lies behind this heartfelt write! Even so, I can still feel the agony, the pain, disillusion and sense of betrayal. But you do not walk alone...:) // paul
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/8/2014 7:21:00 AM
Hi Paul... there's no need to be bothered.. it's just one story out of a millions I've been through.. lol... Thank you so much for your support!! ..:O)) xoxo
Date: 5/7/2014 1:54:00 PM
Oh sweetie...This is SO deep and meaningful. You are the same girl...sweet, beautiful, and strong. Big hugs to you! :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/7/2014 2:22:00 PM
Thanks to you, Eileen.. You helped me live again...^_^ thanks for a sweet chat awhile ago.. hugs!!! ^_^
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