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I have been a part of it

Breaking waves Cresting in chaos Crashing upon the shore Softening Amid the frothing surf Slowly softening Retreating Slipping beneath The unseen rise Of another Forming wave Destined To redefine The hard contours Of resistance

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 12/22/2024 3:49:00 AM

I got reincarnation vibes from this one - it has a myriad of options for the reader. Excellent (of course!)

Michael Tor

Date: 12/22/2024 1:30:00 AM

So clever John. Associating a wave to ones behavioral contours of resistance. This one is a favorite so much thought put forth on this exceptional theme of yours. I hope it gets POTD... Thanks for your effort in creating.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/21/2024 8:03:00 PM

Nice effect, John. ~ Hard-boiled Soft-boiled Egg