I Have a Lover

when you tear at my clothing like that, 
is it because you are desirous of me, 
or because you are in need of skin on skin
breath with breath
the scent of this when we are together?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Voorhees Avatar
January 10, 2009 at 10:25 PM
This is passionate and concise. Nice work!
Ehigiator Avatar
January 10, 2009 at 9:43 AM
This is a poem that passionately asked questions of intimacy, and one's thought..Nice flow and rhythm...Well done.. I loved it*Tyesha
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