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I Have a Lover

when you tear at my clothing like that, is it because you are desirous of me, or because you are in need of skin on skin breath with breath the scent of this when we are together?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/10/2009 10:25:00 PM
This is passionate and concise. Nice work!
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Date: 1/10/2009 9:43:00 AM
This is a poem that passionately asked questions of intimacy, and one's thought..Nice flow and rhythm...Well done.. I loved it*Tyesha
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