Aiyah Torres Poet Blank verse

I Hate You,I Miss You

January blooms again...
memories of past caving in.
When  I close my eyes,
I  see you smiling.
The first night I saw you,
the color of your shirt
The place we hid in,
The scent of your breath.
I still feel your warm caress.
One year has gone away,
the ghost of you I still feel.
When will this memory shut,
'cos I hate it when  you laugh.
It's like an instrumental rock,
giving me emotional attack!
I wish this month will soon expire,
Tomorrow morning,
I'll walk a mile,
Just to forget,
Leave past behind.


I hate 
           when I
                         miss you...
                                         Please,
                                                     Be gone.

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Justin Bordner March 11, 2014 at 7:31 PM I almost feel bad for commenting on this hurt write becsuse it will do what you hate, sorry. Just wanted to let you know I respect Art with raw emotion. J.A.B. Aiyah Torres March 12, 2014 at 7:24 AM sorry ..j.A.B. ,but i didn't get your point.. please expand! ..ha ha ...Thank you!!! ^__^

Mustapha Mohammed January 15, 2014 at 1:21 AM The title instantly drew me in because I like poems with emotions in it. I loved the emotion you put into your poem, reminds me of something I wrote similar. Thanks for sharing, I like it.

Michael Byte January 14, 2014 at 11:54 AM so much feeling in this writing my friend. I can tell you when you really cared for someone the pain never goes away it is always hid inside. I just got shoved out of a close friendship with no reasons given to me. The best way is to kneel in devoted prayer to the lord to comfort and heal it. It also helps having fellow Christians pray. I spent all day Saturday crying and in prayer. Hope these will ease the pain. Your friend Michael