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*i Hate You Like

*I Hate You Like* (For: Brittany Moon) Her Tiny Request** I hate you like the Eclipse of the sun and moon====== Lightning, thunder, twisters,and Hurricane # 7 destruction upon my hate= I hate you like the father who walked out on us====== Hating you is the only way we can relate========== Fire, burn, heat , and smoke, igniting the hate in flames= I hate you like the lion who can't wait to devour his prey==== I hate you like ivy with poison to irritate ============== I hate you indeed, deeper than the abyss in space======== Black, ebony, coal, and darkness you fell in my pit of hate=== I hate you and dispise all your living ways========= I hate you because I want to========== I hate you and nothing compares=============== I hate the living guts out of you ================ ________________________________________________________________________ *A note from Brittany Moon* *Written by: P.D. as a request from me (an opposition to my original poem: I Love You Like)...thank you P.D. for your awesome talent ((BY: Brittany Moon)) ________________________________________________________________________ Commented by: Deborah Guzzi :- ) ------ naww like the taste of curdled milk...my mouths tastes my hate for you... like the painful lingering scen of skunk on a precious cat...my hate for you clings... gumming up my mind like bubble gum in a braid.... smooch (( that is why I love Ya Teach)) p.d.

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Date: 4/6/2016 10:57:00 AM
Ah, pure passion. I would add to your collection, but my passion is all about LUUUUV. Now I have one - Oh how I hate loving you. Not you PD, her. Congrats on this sizzling opus being featured. daver
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Date: 4/4/2016 7:16:00 AM
Hi Linda. Congrats for having your work featured in the Poetry Soup home page!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/15/2014 11:04:00 AM
Linda Such a strong and powerful write on hating someone. I hope you never hate me like that. It would be scary. LOL Thanks for the great comment on my Two Little Poems write.
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Date: 12/21/2012 4:43:00 AM
another inspiring write from you Linda, these poems are getting better and better, did something change in your life, i wonder?
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Date: 12/16/2011 9:15:00 AM
Congratulation my friend on your win and wish you and all yours 'a Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Year'.bl
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Date: 12/15/2011 3:38:00 PM
I gotta come up with a line too...I feel soooo left out. Here goes..."I hate you like all the floozies my ex picked up on dart night! I hate you like a super model hates cellulite! I hate you so much I just want to choke your neck tight! (ooops, no violence. I couldn't help myself!) Linda, I just love your unique angle on poetry...u push it to the edge and then push a lil more. A rebel poetess...ahhhh, so refreshing! Luv, RIX
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Date: 12/15/2011 12:12:00 PM
p.d. congrats on your win, happy holidays..David
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Date: 12/15/2011 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Chris' contest P.D. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/15/2011 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations x
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Date: 7/13/2010 8:40:00 PM
Wow! So much anger and animosity bleeding from my screen! I'm so glad that I've never learned to hate, not like that! I sometimes harbor hard feelings for awhile but it feels so bad that I always give it to the Lord, and gladly so. You gt S.M.
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:24:00 PM
..scary lol .buht REALLY good .!
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Date: 6/25/2010 9:48:00 AM
I love this hate poem :)
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Date: 6/19/2010 1:13:00 PM
I hate you like....is as far as I would get before my wife made it a requirement for me to have false teeth. Talent reigns supreme!
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:45:00 PM
nice one
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Date: 6/13/2010 11:31:00 AM
CUTE DEDICATIoN. NICE FORM.-SKAT
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Date: 6/12/2010 11:14:00 AM
Great write my friend. Your skills always flash in a unique way every where in your Poetry. It is apparent here also. But I fear often too much hate turns into love, it is not my idea, but it is a fact of human psychology. May be your hate is too strong not to get torn into love. My best wishes for a strong PD. Love and best wishes ...... Ravindra......Poet D.
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Date: 6/11/2010 5:23:00 PM
This is a very strong poem. It spoke volumes to me and you did a really wonderful with this one.
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Date: 6/8/2010 11:26:00 AM
wow that a lot of hate for one person nice right btw if u hav a myspace my e-mail is scarletbella14@yahoo.com srry lol i just need help and advice
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Date: 6/6/2010 4:35:00 PM
I love the way U express D hate 2 the oposite of love. CUTE I WILL GO READ BRITTANIES NOW. Love ya S.K.A.T.
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Date: 6/6/2010 2:54:00 PM
hey there again--I only got what you meant just now..so you're also gonna be lying low here? I hope not too low, though--lots of people are gonna miss you if that's the case! me, I'm gonna be back on becoming a mushroom over here--my past couple of weeks here have been very productive--haha all good things must come to an end (well temporary end) for me...& i'll just be around, not just too often (haha now I'm going around in circle) better stop now.
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:44:00 AM
I do hope that your hate turned into love now, P.D.---Well written and enjoyed reading your poem!!! Thank you for your comments on Kandy Perahera. It was in 1989 when I've seen it in Kandy, Sri Lanka while I was working there at the university. It is really a remarkable sight especially at night!...Have a great Sunday...Gert
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Date: 6/6/2010 3:21:00 AM
I love the way your express your hate..:) loved the poem cheers suresh
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:31:00 PM
Hey P.D. - I think that the only thing thay you hate is not having something or someone to write about! Especially like the symbolism you use here to describe hate. I hate it like ice cream cones on a hot day...lol. Dan C Thanks for your continued comments!
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Date: 6/5/2010 12:15:00 AM
good morning Charles, love your sense of humor. Poor little Brittany is a young teenage friend. I feel no hate for her. have a nice ond,..p.d.
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Date: 6/4/2010 11:23:00 PM
This is good but what do I do now that I also hate Brittany! Good slam PD--Charles
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