*i Hate You Like
*I Hate You Like* (For: Brittany Moon) Her Tiny Request**
I hate you like the Eclipse of the sun and moon======
Lightning, thunder, twisters,and Hurricane # 7 destruction upon my hate=
I hate you like the father who walked out on us======
Hating you is the only way we can relate==========
Fire, burn, heat , and smoke, igniting the hate in flames=
I hate you like the lion who can't wait to devour his prey====
I hate you like ivy with poison to irritate ==============
I hate you indeed, deeper than the abyss in space========
Black, ebony, coal, and darkness you fell in my pit of hate===
I hate you and dispise all your living ways=========
I hate you because I want to==========
I hate you and nothing compares===============
I hate the living guts out of you ================
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*A note from Brittany Moon*
*Written by: P.D. as a request from me (an opposition to my original poem: I Love You
Like)...thank you P.D. for your awesome talent ((BY: Brittany Moon))
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Commented by: Deborah Guzzi :- ) ------
naww like the taste of curdled milk...my mouths tastes my hate for you...
like the painful lingering scen of skunk on a precious cat...my hate for you clings...
gumming up my mind like bubble gum in a braid....
smooch (( that is why I love Ya Teach)) p.d.
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