I Hate You

I hate you because you stole my heart,
but I don’t want it returned;
The fact that it is safe with you,
is something I have learned.

I hate the way you smile at me,
It stops all time and space;
When you are near, I feel at ease,
and grounded in my place.

I hate how you can make time fly,
and yet, make each moment last;
I feel as though you are my world,
I hate the spell you’ve cast.

I hate the times you’ve shown you care,
I always question why;
I know, that I can count on you,
to catch the tears I cry.

I hate the way you look at me,
what you see I do not know;
I’m scared you’ll find out how I feel,
I hope it doesn’t show.

I hate the way you touch my hand,
because eventually, you let go;
I hate the way you hug me tight,
my feelings over-flow.

I hate the way you talk to me,
Your voice is firm, but kind;
The way you think, is different,
I appreciate, your mind.

I hate you because of who you are to me,
You cannot be replaced;
I hate the way you make me feel,
but my emotions, must be faced.

I love, the warmth your presence brings,
and how you’re always true;
For the soul that you are,
until I die, I will love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/2/2018 4:10:00 PM
Wow, I am reading your poems and this one is fantastic. It just might be your best. Miranda
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:37:00 PM
enjoying the rawness in your poem once again....SKAT
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Date: 5/30/2015 5:13:00 PM
To need a heartbeat so badly, to have a treasure that can't be kept, to touch kind lips that never want to leave, but must makes this unique hate something cathartic, yet like special love touch the hate also must leave. I really love how in the end you keep your love alive despite the pain, expressed with a sweet bleeding loyalty. There is also an undeniable truth in the passionate moments you share. Your emotions are so real Faiqaah...J.A.B.
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Faaiqah Abader
Date: 6/2/2015 1:23:00 PM
Thanku so much Justin!! I truly appreciate it; and I love how poetic your kind comments are! -so glad you connected with my poem:) May you always have a happy beat in your heart. xxF
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Justin Bordner
Date: 5/30/2015 5:14:00 PM
A FAV!!! J.A.B.
Date: 5/28/2015 5:28:00 AM
I can see why this won over so many. One hears and feels the innocence of this one who loves and hates. A 7 . Congratulations on your win! My bad for being so late. Still catching up with my reading.
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Faaiqah Abader
Date: 6/2/2015 1:15:00 PM
Thanku so much Kim; much appreciated:) xxF
Date: 5/19/2015 4:31:00 PM
A huge thank you to Justin Bordner for the contest :)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 5/30/2015 5:01:00 PM
I thank you Faaiqah, your heart fire is intensely eloquent...Justin
Date: 5/19/2015 9:47:00 AM
Great Job!
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Faaiqah Abader
Date: 5/19/2015 4:28:00 PM
Thanx Richard:)
Date: 5/19/2015 9:22:00 AM
Faaiqah, Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. SKAT
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Faaiqah Abader
Date: 5/19/2015 4:27:00 PM
Thanku SKAT:) Have a nice day too! xx
Date: 5/19/2015 1:16:00 AM
Congratulations Faaqia great result here..'
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Faaiqah Abader
Date: 5/19/2015 4:26:00 PM
Thanx Joe, I appreciate it:)
Date: 5/18/2015 10:23:00 PM
Hate and Love can be related...Congrats on your win!
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Faaiqah Abader
Date: 5/19/2015 4:24:00 PM
Thanx Ed:)
Date: 5/11/2015 12:48:00 PM
hai faaqia Abadader? how about may poem? actually i've writeen more than 500 peoms, but i really sad, because i can't speak english well... Nice to meet you faqiaa. May I know where are you from?
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Faaiqah Abader
Date: 5/11/2015 4:07:00 PM
Hi Ell. I did read it; it sounds lovely but I unfortunately don't understand it as I can only speak English. I have also read your English poems here on poetrysoup; I really like your poem Only The Sun; and don't be sad, your English is actually very good and will get better:) It is nice to meet you too; I am from South Africa. Best Regards -F
Date: 5/10/2015 1:57:00 PM
thank you sister! iam indonesian love poem here my blog poem thank you for visiting http://www.puisiprotes.ga/
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Faaiqah Abader
Date: 5/10/2015 7:46:00 PM
Thank you Ell! :) I will definitely visit it xxF;)
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