I Hate To Admit It

~ Inspired by the likes of Hoplessly Devoted to You ~

The reflection of your beauty are shadows on the wall,
The abstract of your spirit is still standing in the hall,
I know I am a victim of this ghostly fantasy,
I hate to admit it, but your love is haunting me.

I hate to admit it, but you appear wherever I go,
I can't fight the feeling as the magic begins to grow,
The thrill of believing brings a scary urgency,
I hate to admit it, but your love is haunting me.

As I lie here not sleeping somewhere deep in the night,
Your whisper of desire brings a passion of fright,
I can't go on believing as the spirits above agree,
I hate to admit it, but your love is haunting me.

I hate to admit it, but life is running late,
What love has to offer will die throughout the wait,
I must find a way to break this broken heart free,
I hate to admit it, but your love is haunting me.

Featured: 5/29/2016

Written: 5/22/2016
Type: Heroic Couplets
Contest: Grens Evergreens (Golden Oldies) 3
Contest Sponsor: Teppo Gren
Placement:2nd Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/3/2016 2:21:00 PM
I absolutely adore this. I concur with the box below - a WOW ... CayCay
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Jesse Day
Date: 8/5/2016 6:34:00 AM
Thank you, CayCay! Jesse
Date: 6/27/2016 4:57:00 AM
This is great. Wow.
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Jesse Day
Date: 6/27/2016 5:51:00 PM
Thank you! I am happy you enjoyed. - Jesse
Date: 6/2/2016 8:53:00 AM
Very beautiful and romantic, could be made into lyrics.
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Jesse Day
Date: 6/6/2016 9:49:00 AM
Thank you! I added lyric in the description. - Jesse
Date: 5/24/2016 12:30:00 PM
- Forget the old "ghosts" .... A wonderful poem, Jesse - hugs // Sun :)
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Jesse Day
Date: 5/25/2016 9:50:00 AM
Thank you reading my poem and your comments - Jesse
Date: 5/22/2016 10:09:00 PM
Firstly, thank you for your comment on my 'fog' write. Love haunts, and in time will find it's own peace and you will be free
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Jesse Day
Date: 5/23/2016 10:34:00 AM
Thank you for your comment - I do agree - these writings bring peace in themselves. Looking forward to more of your reads - Jesse
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