I Hate To Admit It

~ Inspired by the likes of Hoplessly Devoted to You ~

The reflection of your beauty are shadows on the wall,
The abstract of your spirit is still standing in the hall,
I know I am a victim of this ghostly fantasy,
I hate to admit it, but your love is haunting me.

I hate to admit it, but you appear wherever I go,
I can't fight the feeling as the magic begins to grow,
The thrill of believing brings a scary urgency,
I hate to admit it, but your love is haunting me.

As I lie here not sleeping somewhere deep in the night,
Your whisper of desire brings a passion of fright,
I can't go on believing as the spirits above agree,
I hate to admit it, but your love is haunting me.

I hate to admit it, but life is running late,
What love has to offer will die throughout the wait,
I must find a way to break this broken heart free,
I hate to admit it, but your love is haunting me.

Featured: 5/29/2016

Written: 5/22/2016
Type: Heroic Couplets
Contest: Grens Evergreens (Golden Oldies) 3
Contest Sponsor: Teppo Gren
Placement:2nd Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Godwin Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 2:21 PM
I absolutely adore this. I concur with the box below - a WOW ... CayCay
Day Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 6:34 AM
Thank you, CayCay! Jesse
Willow Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 4:57 AM
This is great. Wow.
Day Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Thank you! I am happy you enjoyed. - Jesse
Teagan Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 8:53 AM
Very beautiful and romantic, could be made into lyrics.
Day Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Thank you! I added lyric in the description. - Jesse
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 12:30 PM
- Forget the old "ghosts" .... A wonderful poem, Jesse - hugs // Sun :)
Day Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 9:50 AM
Thank you reading my poem and your comments - Jesse
Ninja Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 10:09 PM
Firstly, thank you for your comment on my 'fog' write. Love haunts, and in time will find it's own peace and you will be free
Day Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Thank you for your comment - I do agree - these writings bring peace in themselves. Looking forward to more of your reads - Jesse
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