Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- I Hate the Word - Hate -

HATE is a very strong word                      I like the soft words
                    HATE is awful                            why not show consideration
               HATE leads to unrest                              I like the peace
               HATE leads to hostility                           friendship is a joy
                  HATE means war                           why kill, when we can love
            The world is full of HATRED           let`s share the world with happiness
                                      
                                                



                



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28.July 2012

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Liam Mcdaid October 17, 2014 at 3:46 AM oh i feel the same with that word its the dark side of beauty excellent piece of writing tipping the invisible hat with a smile

Timothy Hicks April 16, 2013 at 4:19 AM When I was little I used to have little temper tantrums (people hated babysitting me). That doesn't happen anymore and I'm glad... hatred is like a very heavy boulder that you have to lug around with you wherever you go. Why carry a big dumb rock around with you? Another good one! I think this piece, specifically, is one that tells me the most about who you are as a person... Anne-Lise Andresen April 16, 2013 at 4:30 AM Thank you for taking the time to read it Timothy ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jordan Dickinson October 23, 2012 at 9:33 AM This is so true, I wish more people had the view you have, the world would be a happier and safer place! Anne-Lise Andresen October 23, 2012 at 9:52 AM Jordan, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Success Akpojotor September 12, 2012 at 7:51 AM Yes, hate is more than the f-word. Bless you Anne! Anne-Lise Andresen September 12, 2012 at 10:55 AM David, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2012 at 5:37 AM I can't see if I commented on this before, but I really like how you did this one, dividing it up and showing contrasts. too bad it was not in the contest!!! Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2012 at 6:18 AM Andrea, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman August 29, 2012 at 10:43 AM Me too! i hate HATE, for you though only peace and happiness, after all you give so much to us all here on soup, in fact you are very special. Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2012 at 10:55 AM Thank you Harry so sweet comments.There is only one Harry Horsman to ! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Cory Long August 25, 2012 at 6:55 AM love the message you send.. I do not like the word HATE either sounds so brutal.. have a great day.. soup mail Cory Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2012 at 6:59 AM Cory, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Laura Breidenthal August 17, 2012 at 2:28 PM Very nice poem here. :) Always, Laura Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2012 at 2:38 PM Laura, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun August 14, 2012 at 7:08 AM This is a very fantastic poem of yours, Anne Lise. Thank you very much for sharing especially your friendship and love. hugs-leonora Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2012 at 9:23 AM Leonora, thank you for visit and comments my poem - always welcome . oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley August 8, 2012 at 12:38 PM No room for hate,when all you have is LOVE in your heart..~<3 And you do have love :o) Nice write! f.e.f oxox Anne-Lise Andresen August 8, 2012 at 12:46 PM Dan, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)

Danny Stinson August 6, 2012 at 6:20 PM What a plea for love and understanding. I adore it. Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2012 at 3:23 AM Danny, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Dawn Mclaughlin August 6, 2012 at 5:45 PM Good write Anne i like this xx Thank you for the lovely comment on my poem x Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2012 at 3:22 AM Dawn, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Lucilla Carrillo August 4, 2012 at 1:13 PM Good write Anne. I like it. Thanks for sharing. Have a good weekend. Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen August 4, 2012 at 1:14 PM Lucilla, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

David Scott August 2, 2012 at 2:46 PM if only things were like this nice poem thankyou for your comments on mine xx david scott Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2012 at 2:46 AM David, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Daver Austin August 2, 2012 at 2:20 PM Yep! The word is LOVE. Love you, Anne. daver Anne-Lise Andresen August 2, 2012 at 2:39 PM Daver, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise

Bl Devnath August 2, 2012 at 9:33 AM Superb poem. Both positive and negative are depicted with few words about hate and love. Always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen August 2, 2012 at 10:00 AM bl. - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 2, 2012 at 8:33 AM super impact of parallels on hate and peace and joy Anne-Lise.. u brought it all out on this page luv.. Anne-Lise Andresen August 2, 2012 at 8:53 AM Linda-Marie, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Kenisha Shines August 2, 2012 at 12:56 AM simple yet very strong message. Anne-Lise Andresen August 2, 2012 at 3:26 AM Kenisha, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Jessica Warren August 1, 2012 at 1:00 PM Great poem.short but with the use of strong words, simple but deep. I engoyed reading it;) Anne-Lise Andresen August 1, 2012 at 1:02 PM Jessica, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Black Eyed Susan August 1, 2012 at 8:37 AM good advice - I've heard that there can't be love without hate - that you have to know one to know the other. what do you think? Anne-Lise Andresen August 1, 2012 at 9:28 AM Hi, B.E.S. - I do not use the word hate - there are thing I do no like - but :HATE - I do not think I can hate, it is a very,very strong word - and not forgiveness. - Thank you for visit and comments my poem / you are always welcome. - Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Jonas L. Rozario July 31, 2012 at 8:53 AM This is very true & thoughtful grandma...I love the way you wrote it...much enjoyed your poem...:)...HUGS!!! Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2012 at 10:34 AM Jonas, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love grandma :)

David Williams July 31, 2012 at 5:00 AM Hi Anne nice to see you as a premium member...David Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2012 at 5:59 AM Thank you David. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud July 31, 2012 at 3:42 AM amazing, anne... i love the contrast approach between love and hate.. nice format that lends more imagery to your pice .. have a smiling day!..:)huggs! Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2012 at 5:59 AM Nette, always welcome.....thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Ravi Sathasivam July 31, 2012 at 12:01 AM Amazing. Very thoughtful write. Tfs Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2012 at 12:47 AM Ravi, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Cecilia Macfarlane July 30, 2012 at 3:29 PM Awesome write Anne Lise...it takes too much energy to hate, I love how you think, love is definitely the way to go! Hugs. Soup mail! Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2012 at 12:46 AM Cecilia, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

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