I Hate School

I HATE SCHOOL
What did you do at school my son? Was your day a happy one? Did you get some good work done? Did you have a lot of fun At lunchtime, playing in the sun? No, it wasn’t as it ought to be. First I tripped and grazed my knee And Matron had to bandage me. While all the children laughed with glee. I didn’t like the lunch today But everybody must obey The rules and eat it come what may. And then I spelt a word wrong on the board And again they laughed with one accord. All-in-all, the day was a disaster. So, right from when the day had begun, I hated every hour, you see. There was no sun, the sky was grey. I’d like to give up school, Oh Lord. What a shame that I’m Headmaster. 11th April 2020 Minuanetta Poems contest Sponsor - Emile Pinet
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Date: 4/24/2020 10:20:00 AM
'Bryn, Excellent write. Nice twist at the end! David'
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Date: 4/23/2020 3:51:00 PM
Been there as a teacher, many days. As I look back, it helped me realize how bad days can be for students too. Clever indeed, Bryn,
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Date: 4/23/2020 10:24:00 AM
What a clever ending to your minuanetta, Bryn. Made me laugh! Nicely done on the challenging form and congratulations on your podium win.
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Date: 4/23/2020 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations Bryn, your poem earned "Second Place" in my contest! Due to the technical demands of this form it was a very difficult contest to judge, but your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 5/1/2020 3:30:00 AM
Thank you Emile. It was a fun one to do
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