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I Had the Grapes

I had the grapes but I wanted the vine I had the vine then wanted the garden I got the garden and needed the valley the valley was mine but not the peaks so I got the mountains but the sky was out of reach so I stole the sky but the stars stayed where they wanted to be so I swallowed them up inside of me and when I had it all I came to see that I had sadly ceased to be.

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Date: 3/30/2019 8:38:00 PM
I like the notion of time being something we fill ourselves with, the want and then yeah...we all fall down :-/
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Joseph Adler
Date: 4/1/2019 1:15:00 PM
Thank you Thresha. I'm one of your followers, your poems are great! Thx again.
Date: 10/17/2016 11:41:00 AM
I gave this a seven, Joseph. An enjoyable read, with a timely message.
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Date: 7/8/2016 5:15:00 PM
A good flow a pleasure read did not want it to stop. Nice ...Thank you Joseph
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