I Had Lost My Sun
I have to get this right! Old Gus settled.
My first essay without Miss Edward’s help.
For a contest; so it wouldn’t be right.
My feet were mammoth, I tried to collect them.
Old Gus’s ears perked up. He was gone.
Raccoon or opossum maybe.
A tribute to my mom I thought,
Remembering her smile, her laugh, her hug.
I was seven when flu took her.
Came home from school to find out.
Dad grieving so hard. Bad time.
He had lost a wife. I had lost my sun.
Dad peeked in. How’s it going, son?
He gave me a nod. Anything I can do?
He was not demonstrative. Not a toucher.
“She was a hugger,” I wrote. “I miss that the most.”
Written 9-30-2019
Contest: Realism Art Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Eve Roper Photo Selected: #2
Copyright © Caren Krutsinger | Year Posted 2019
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