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I Had Lost My Sun

I have to get this right! Old Gus settled. My first essay without Miss Edward’s help. For a contest; so it wouldn’t be right. My feet were mammoth, I tried to collect them. Old Gus’s ears perked up. He was gone. Raccoon or opossum maybe. A tribute to my mom I thought, Remembering her smile, her laugh, her hug. I was seven when flu took her. Came home from school to find out. Dad grieving so hard. Bad time. He had lost a wife. I had lost my sun. Dad peeked in. How’s it going, son? He gave me a nod. Anything I can do? He was not demonstrative. Not a toucher. “She was a hugger,” I wrote. “I miss that the most.” Written 9-30-2019 Contest: Realism Art Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper Photo Selected: #2

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Date: 10/25/2019 5:21:00 PM
Caren, a heartbreaking write, I like I lost my sun line. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/23/2019 12:48:00 PM
Hi Karen, You created such an heartfelt narrative for the photo. Congratulations on your 2nd place win.:-) Alexis
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/25/2019 5:39:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 10/23/2019 7:44:00 AM
Love this emotive write! Congratulations, Caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/25/2019 5:39:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 10/21/2019 7:58:00 PM
oh what a heart breaker. You ended this perfectly, Caren. Great tender little story. Congrats for the win.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/25/2019 5:39:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 10/21/2019 2:21:00 AM
I have tears at your poem Caren especially the final stanza which broke my heart, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2019 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Jan.

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