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I Guess I Am Still Grieving

 
Your scent still soothes me, I can still recall your voice, Reminiscing in day dreams, Redemption moves me, Absolution had no choice, Connected by our heartstrings. Flooding memories, Rivers of pictures of you, Retrieving lives you have changed, Your sky, masterpiece, You never sought your value, Sadness and became estranged. Effected by dark, Infliction from self pity, I wish you saw your own white, Halo lights a spark, Reflection, you so pretty, You lost a terrible fight. Every now and then, I catch a glimpse of your smile, Dreams so vivid, eyes open, I can't comprehend, Why you would choose your lifestyle, Saving you I was hoping. I believed in you, But you didn't in yourself, You gave up with too much ease, If your love was true, Why couldn't we stay ourselves, We just sat and watched you bleed. Written By: Laura Urbaniak Date: November 6, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 7:48 PM
It's very good that you thought outside the box and did poetry a new way. I find with certain topics like this one, so deep and personal, some forms work better than others. This worked superbly. Sorry for your loss.
Scars Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:15 PM
Thank you Andrea very much. I appreciate your kind words, be blessed -LU :)
Rodgers Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 5:35 PM
Your meshing of form and emotion gives us a true sense of your loss.
Scars Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Thank you Dave :) Be blessed -LU xxx
Shaw Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Such beauty in your words of anguish, memories and hope lost. Great emotive write, Laura. xo
Scars Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 12:04 PM
Thank you Kimberly :) Be blessed -LU
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