I Give Praises To Thee { Dramatic Diminished Hexaverse }

when feeling so gloomed
when feeling so doomed
when feeling so scared
when feeling so dared
there's someone who cares


He's in our heart
He's in our touch
He's in our faith
For He listens


to our cries
to our wants
to our needs

So come  
and praise 

God






{Amen}
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 14, 2008 at 7:20 PM
Amen! So much truth in this one. Thank you for sharing it. Best wishes with all your writing endeavors my friend. God bless. Karen
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August 11, 2008 at 3:40 PM
And I add my Amen to the lovely poem, Kathy. I was looking at the clouds this afternoon while I was driving and I saw the figure of God in them. My heart just burst. God Bless, Cile
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August 11, 2008 at 7:31 AM
Beautiful spiritual write! Don't believe I have ever seen one quite like this in this form. Great job! Love, Shar
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