-i Found Not a Faithful Tree-

i embraced my felicity as if hope was my was fate-
~ the fate i yearned for when youth was all i had ~
now i see the yesterdays are much more than just a nude desultory 
hourglass bleeding evocative transgressions 
(sins of the father revealed; me fearing love)

for i used to dwell in a beguiled nest- (actually, multiple nests last year) 
and those evanescent moments creep like apparitions haunting my 
sensitive essence;
fruitless branches curled to make a home for me, but no warmth was felt-
day after day, i tried my best to defeat those visceral ravens i tackled just 
to prove to myself i am worthy of a safe and comforting home 
(a home where my fledglings rest without worry)

for there is no time to justify what i did not do;
no sky to fly away from what I could not rescue-

i remember those nests from last year-
where the medallion Maple blades 
redeemed a plethora of my poor intentions…
and the barren branches made me weak

for i NEVER found a faithful tree…
sturdy enough to keep hold of me

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November 6, 2019
Craig Cornish
Last Years Nests Contest
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Agustin Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:39 PM
Wow! Congrats! These last lines of yours make me ponder: "for i NEVER found a faithful tree… sturdy enough to keep hold of me." It's my prayer that the Lord will give you one, since He can be that faithful tree. God bless you.
Kauffman Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Congrats on your winning poem that truly expresses leaving behind the old.
Hamilton Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 9:45 AM
So well done Laura, congrats on another winner!
Scars Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 9:07 AM
thank you sweet man, smiling am I because of you...x:-)-luloo
Na Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 7:50 PM
Congrats Lu Loo on your winning poem
Scars Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 9:06 AM
thank you dear Gregory x:-)-luloo
Adams Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 3:38 PM
this was wonderfully penned my sweet friend...congratulations on your top win :) hugs
Scars Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 9:06 AM
many thanks lovely lady, you rock :):) -luloo
Mcintosh Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 10:10 AM
Exceptional poem. So beautifully done. I hope it wins. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
Scars Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 9:06 AM
thank you dear RR! :):) -luloo
Green Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 8:17 AM
Very well done Luloo. I love the imagery you have created in this piece. It falls gracefully like leaves of this tree you long to find. There is a bit of longing, perhaps sadness but all in all, this one spoke loudly to me. Best wishes in the contest
Scars Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 9:43 AM
thank you once again dear man- you always make me smile x:)-luloo
Scars Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 9:43 AM
thank you once again dear man- you always make me smile x:)-luloo
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