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I Found God

I woke up from another drunk And I found God I couldn't rise God helped me up I felt the love of a stranger And I found God I thought no one cared God said he loved me Through clenched teeth I found God I wanted revenge God said to let it go In my broken heart I found God I lost my loved God said we would meet again

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Date: 9/29/2019 8:50:00 PM
Great poem, Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/30/2019 3:02:00 PM
Thank you for your many kind words
Date: 9/7/2019 1:59:00 PM
Simple and perfectly portrayed.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/9/2019 8:32:00 AM
Thank you Richard!
Date: 9/6/2019 12:59:00 PM
We just have to accept him and let him in. Difficult sometimes when we hit a wall in life.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/6/2019 3:08:00 PM
Thank you friend
Date: 9/6/2019 3:55:00 AM
Just this would have been enough, Timothy. "I felt the love of a stranger And I found God" . The rest was showing off!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/6/2019 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Caren

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