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I FORGIVE YOU

I slaved for all of three minutes To enter your last competition. The finished product was brilliant, It was sure to take first position. And then I sat back and waited, Eagerly checking each day. The poems were only three minutes long, So why the long delay? At last the results are published, The judging has been concluded. But you’ve clearly got it all wrong, For mine has not been included. Perhaps I was being conceited, And pride comes before a fall. So I’ve decided to forgive you. It’s Christmas after all

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Date: 3/24/2025 2:22:00 AM
You are all very generous. Thank you!
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Date: 3/23/2025 9:34:00 PM
Congrats on 1st place in my sloth-like contest. I enjoyed your use of irony and perfect word choice. You are first place my good man! But you don't need me to tell you that.
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Date: 3/23/2025 1:11:00 PM
lol ~ better luck next time, Bryn. But it's awfully big of you to offer your forgiveness.
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Date: 12/15/2024 4:57:00 PM
Excellent.
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Date: 12/15/2024 5:51:00 AM
Matt would approve. Buwahahaha. Yes, I remember your sense of humor
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