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I Forever Die

What do I feel, what could I say? My heart won't heal, the pain won't go away. I forever look, for your loving hand. My heart you took, I was so high, now I land. You left me for dead, I start to choke. But you heard as I said, "My heart broke!" I scream and I die, as you stood by. Every lie, makes me forever cry. Take my hand, I mean everything to you. Take your stand, for we are through. Why do you weep, I did nothing. Just lay me to sleep, for the misery is what you bring. My heart you would keep, if the sorrow I did not sing. So just leave, do not stay. What should I believe, for the love is away. Help me stand, help me die. Where's your hand, just another lie. Used your last chance, to bring me love. Yet are last dance, is not what I dreamt of. So move away, wipe your tears. Now you dont stay, so feel my fears. You were so tangible, I'd never let you go. This was no fable, I would always know. Yet you say goodbye, as I forever die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/17/2008 6:01:00 PM
Wow what a truly heartfelt poem. Love lost is hard and I can tell by your writing you are a true romantic. From one Romantic to another I so feel you on this poem. Great write. Thanks for your comment as well.
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Date: 10/17/2008 5:32:00 PM
Thanks for the comment bru :) You're not too bad at writing poetry yourself, this is really good
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