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I Finally Fell...In Love

I can’t believe I finally fell… in love Oh, what I felt in my heart locked up my lips The pleasant picture I saw rocked all my ribs This darling dame was like an angel from above We were drowning deep playing the golden game I became her hero and when’re it rains I’m her rainbow She became my shadow and all night… she’s my pillow We share life and love as if we’re sharing flower and frame I decided to spend this sweet summer With my sweetie, a blue beautiful butterfly Her love radiates my heart like the stars in the sky I am cocooned in comfort… in this warm weather Swimming, strolling singing and snugging Lost in the steamy summer love as we roll and roam Forgetting we have just few days left to go back home On the sweet sand at the beach we couldn’t stop snogging

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/13/2010 5:59:00 PM
I this poem to it pretty good. You have a cool gift..its the way you write cool poetry.
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Date: 7/19/2010 7:33:00 PM
Congrats on the 10th place win
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Date: 7/19/2010 5:43:00 PM
I was going to say before I ran out of room, Thank you for your comments on my poetry and I'm sorry it's took so long to get over here to see you. I'll be checking your work out in the next couple of weeks, if the rest is like this poem then you should be getting some more from me! Thanks again, your friend and brother in Christ Jesus.
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Date: 7/19/2010 5:39:00 PM
Lovely poem Adeleke. I've been waiting for ten years now myself. After suffering through two wives and twenty years of marriage and then the ensuing divorces I said, "I GIVE UP!" It seems that I have a broken picker-outer, so I told God that I would remain celibate and at home until He brought me His choice. But after all this time I don't know if that's what I even want anymore. Besides, I got a dog and she beats all them X's put together! (well, except in bed of course:)
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Date: 7/19/2010 7:22:00 AM
Congratulations Adeleke on your well deserved win in Linda Marie's contest "Steamy Summer Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:50:00 PM
soupmail
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:49:00 PM
Very sweet and romantic, Adeleke, I never heard of snogging, but i bet it's great. Congratulations to you! andrea
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:31:00 AM
Congrats Adeleke on your success in my contest with this wonderful write... thankxxx for supporting my contest and my new one will be posted today.. enjoyed your e mail and maintain good standing always.. with luv..
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Date: 7/17/2010 8:11:00 AM
Lovely write wit a surprising twist.
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Book: Shattered Sighs