Adeleke Adeite Poet Enclosed Rhyme

I Finally Fell...In Love

I can’t believe I finally fell… in love
Oh, what I felt in my heart locked up my lips
The pleasant picture I saw rocked all my ribs
This darling dame was like an angel from above

We were drowning deep playing the golden game
I became her hero and when’re it rains I’m her rainbow
She became my shadow and all night… she’s my pillow
We share life and love as if we’re sharing flower and frame

I decided to spend this sweet summer 
With my sweetie, a blue beautiful butterfly
Her love radiates my heart like the stars in the sky
I am cocooned in comfort… in this warm weather

Swimming, strolling singing and snugging
Lost in the steamy summer love as we roll and roam
Forgetting we have just few days left to go back home
On the sweet sand at the beach we couldn’t stop snogging

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Nioma Strength August 13, 2010 at 5:59 PM I this poem to it pretty good. You have a cool gift..its the way you write cool poetry.

Dr.Ram Mehta July 19, 2010 at 7:33 PM Congrats on the 10th place win

Timothy Brumley July 19, 2010 at 5:43 PM I was going to say before I ran out of room, Thank you for your comments on my poetry and I'm sorry it's took so long to get over here to see you. I'll be checking your work out in the next couple of weeks, if the rest is like this poem then you should be getting some more from me! Thanks again, your friend and brother in Christ Jesus.

Timothy Brumley July 19, 2010 at 5:39 PM Lovely poem Adeleke. I've been waiting for ten years now myself. After suffering through two wives and twenty years of marriage and then the ensuing divorces I said, "I GIVE UP!" It seems that I have a broken picker-outer, so I told God that I would remain celibate and at home until He brought me His choice. But after all this time I don't know if that's what I even want anymore. Besides, I got a dog and she beats all them X's put together! (well, except in bed of course:)

Carol Sunshine Brown July 19, 2010 at 7:22 AM Congratulations Adeleke on your well deserved win in Linda Marie's contest "Steamy Summer Love". Love, Carol

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Andrea Dietrich July 18, 2010 at 7:49 PM Very sweet and romantic, Adeleke, I never heard of snogging, but i bet it's great. Congratulations to you! andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 18, 2010 at 7:31 AM Congrats Adeleke on your success in my contest with this wonderful write... thankxxx for supporting my contest and my new one will be posted today.. enjoyed your e mail and maintain good standing always.. with luv..

Earle Brown July 17, 2010 at 8:11 AM Lovely write wit a surprising twist.