I Fell Madeline

I fell to the enemy of
The leaf, 
I fell to the green hills,
I was coming to you
And I fell.
I lost control and I was not
Myself, sunlight has its way
And the night that leads me
To your eyes turns along the
Day.  When I was a child 
And when I was a man,
I met you when I could
Not talk- when I could not
Comprehend my thoughts.
My hands,  my eyes
Speaking in some foreign verse. 
A warm breeze becomes you-
A summer meadow becomes you-
I was coming to you, though like 
Sunlight that hits the ground,
I did too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 15, 2016 at 1:01 AM
well, the imagery is good. SKAT
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