Patrick Collier Poet Personification

I Fell In Love With a Suicidal Girl

I only tell of sunny hours due to sunny wanting days
Her sandy brown skin and melting baby blue eyes
Told a story of sorrow. I only tell of sunny hours
Due to sunny wanting days, a haunting of shame
Manages to storm her mental mind. Kicking out 
The sunlight that would save her. 

I only tell of sunny hours due to sunny wanting days
Rushing her in and out the dark places and shadows 
Called a hospital. Bloody love is what she called us
Pills that targeted her throat that were linked to the dark
I only tell of sunny hours due to sunny wanting days
For the sunlight would save her, I’d praise.

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Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2019 at 1:16 PM - A sense of hopelessness - It's important to talk about how to handle and help people with suicidal thoughts - A deep and serious poem, Patrick - // Anne-Lise :)