I Fell In Love Today

I fell in love today
with her angelic smile

I'm no longer lost today
Her soul gives me light

I can see today
There is no darkness in her presence

I must leave today
To go receive her and carry her away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 28, 2016 at 12:26 PM
this is very nice Jacob.skat
Bennett Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 6:03 PM
Nice flow Jacob.
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January 6, 2016 at 6:05 PM
Thanks, although I'm not very sure of it.
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