I Fell Down

It seems like when I fell down. 
I never got back up. 
Crawling on my hands and knees. 
Struggling through life. 

Every heartache, every problem. 
Feels like a thousand pounds
Pushing me further into the ground. 
Struggling to breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 8, 2010 at 11:27 PM
pretty strong write, nice one
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