I Feel Love

Hotly breathing upon the heartbeats murmur  
where a thousand doves warmly flutters inwardly 
taking one's breath away beyond breathless chants 

Golden miracle of the sun born deeply soft crowning jewels 
dewdrops within the night's reflection sparkle glisten 
where a moon leaves the loving imprint behind timeless

Wings marveling land adoring the haloed vision framed beholding  
oceans whisper softly across the tides moving sands 
each little step up brings us slightly closer to heaven

emotionsfeelingslightmoonsunterza rima

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Darlene De Beaulieu

March 1, 2018 at 7:50 PM

Hello Liam, you sound happy in this poem. yes it does sound like you found love. Have a nice evening my friend.

Donna Loughman

February 20, 2018 at 3:30 PM

Liam, “Wings marveling land adoring the haloed vision framed beholding “...just when I think your writing can’t get more majestic in it’s imagery you once again push the boundaries with your pen..just beautiful:-)

Gary Bateman

February 18, 2018 at 5:04 AM

Hello Liam Mate!! Razzle-Dazzle, hotly breathing, eh?? Magnificently done -- as usual!! Superb imagery all the way through my good friend. A FAVE. Best Wishes, Gary

Vijay Pandit

February 17, 2018 at 5:49 PM

Deeply descriptive and full of awesome imagery. Enjoyed reading your poem Liam.

Dorian Petersen Potter

February 17, 2018 at 2:20 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^