I Feel Like a Rose

I feel like a ROSE
As though I were an actual ROSE
Just as such I feel as though my
Petals are fluffed and moist with morning
Dew, a tranquil VOICE.
The eve of blossoming spawning in the
Pupil of an accurate eye sight.
At the stroke of  dusk, the born. 
on going respite To  the stillness of a  
SLUMBERING MIDNIGHT.
I might just be a ROSE or at least the 
Essence  the spirit of one when  I recite these words
On  royal bluish days with electrifying verbs.
Words concise kind and polite.
I feel just like a ROSE 
It is something special to have each buttery 
Blue petal  caressed.
Yes!! A sort of  somethingness.

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Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 3/16/2017 1:22:00 PM

Thank you, TJ I am experiencing much gladness reading your comments about my poem: I FEEL LIKE A ROSE.

Doug Vinson

Date: 3/15/2017 10:45:00 PM

I like it. : ) Never thought about how a rose could fell, but yeah....

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 4/19/2017 2:15:00 PM

Thank you Doug. You know there's always room for one more rose poem. VBR