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I Feel Like,,

I Feel Lost at Sea, Searching for an Answer, for Help.

Sinking like the Titanic, No Hope of Surviving. 

I Feel like an Urban Legend, never been able to be Discovered

To be understood...


-Brittany-

(please comment and rate if you dont mind :) if you comment ill read your poems and comment on them :) well thank you for reading)

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Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/5/2011 4:39:00 PM Okies. Why do you feel lost at sea? Build on line 1 Then WHY do you feel like you are sinking? and why the Titanic? build on line 2. Why do you feel like an Urban Legend? [to me that would be like Jack the Ripper]...you can list your form as Verse but you really need to write more for it to be a verse dear new poet friend. Light & Love Login to Reply Brittany Andrews Date: 10/6/2011 12:19:00 PM oki doki thank you for you advice Debbie :) ima try and change it thank you