Brittany Andrews Poet Dramatic Verse

I Feel Like,,

I Feel Lost at Sea, Searching for an Answer, for Help.

Sinking like the Titanic, No Hope of Surviving. 

I Feel like an Urban Legend, never been able to be Discovered

To be understood...


-Brittany-

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Debbie Guzzi October 5, 2011 at 4:39 PM Okies. Why do you feel lost at sea? Build on line 1 Then WHY do you feel like you are sinking? and why the Titanic? build on line 2. Why do you feel like an Urban Legend? [to me that would be like Jack the Ripper]...you can list your form as Verse but you really need to write more for it to be a verse dear new poet friend. Light & Love Brittany Andrews October 6, 2011 at 12:19 PM oki doki thank you for you advice Debbie :) ima try and change it thank you