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I Feel Fresh Doubt

I wrote a limerick last night, And dreading that no reader laughed, I sulk and feel compelled to write What lures me to this poet-craft. And dreading that no reader laughed, I'll jot this pantoum to explain What lures me to this poet-craft ... Pantoums, I find, are pleasure's bane ... I'll jot this pantoum to explain I love to write, but feel fresh doubt (Pantoums, I find, are pleasure's bane) So from this craft I must bail out? I love to write, but feel fresh doubt Because pantoum schemes drive me mad So from this craft I must bail out-- That one small fact sure makes me glad. Because pantoum schemes drive me mad I sulk and feel compelled to write That one small fact sure makes me glad: I wrote a limerick last night! December 2, 2022 Favorite Rhyming Poem 2nd Half 2022 Contest Julia Ward, Sponsor

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Date: 2/8/2023 9:47:00 AM
David, congratulations on your win! Somehow I don't think you're alone! Nicely crafted. Blessings to you.
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David Bose
Date: 2/10/2023 7:10:00 AM
Thank you, Sam. Yes, I imagine we all click that "post poem" button and have second thoughts. It's nice when one works out!
Date: 2/3/2023 5:09:00 AM
David, you've obviously put much thought into this; it's been very cleverly crafted which takes skill.. Congratulations on your top placing in Julia's contest. Well deserved. Cheers - Gary
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David Bose
Date: 2/3/2023 5:10:00 AM
Thanks, Gary ... it was a fun challenge.
Date: 2/1/2023 8:28:00 PM
Ha! Hilarious! Congrats!!!
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David Bose
Date: 2/2/2023 4:58:00 AM
Thanks, Margarita. Writing it was a combination of fun and frustration. I'm glad you enjoy it. Dave
Date: 2/1/2023 5:47:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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David Bose
Date: 2/2/2023 4:59:00 AM
Thank you, Beata.
Date: 2/1/2023 2:29:00 PM
David, this is a masterpiece! I often find that my sense of humor is radically different than that of others. Also, I remember my first attempt at a pantoum. The last stanza was laughable. I had to start over. CONGRATS on your well-deserved top win with this great pantoum! Janice
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David Bose
Date: 2/2/2023 5:05:00 AM
Many thanks, Janice, you're too kind. But I'm glad you enjoy humor in poetry; we seem overloaded with angst and heart-break. Thanks again for your kind words. Dave
Date: 2/1/2023 1:19:00 PM
so cool. Talking about two different forms inside the pantoum. Congrats on win.
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David Bose
Date: 2/2/2023 5:06:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. This is a fun way to start winter's most dismal month.
Date: 2/1/2023 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning and witty poem Dave! :)
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David Bose
Date: 2/2/2023 5:08:00 AM
Thanks, Linda. I was pleased the moment I considered it finished, and more satisfied now. Thank you, Dave

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