Carmine Colasurdo Poet Dramatic Verse

I Feel

I Feel

I feel weak...
my arms heavy,
my legs about to fall,
as my face dropped,
as my words began to stall.

I feel cold...
my lips turning blue,
my hands starting to shake,
as I got goose bumps,
as my heart began to break.

I feel confused...
my head throbbing,
my emotions in a twist,
as I wonder "was it all a lie?"
"was I another on her list?"

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Destroyer A April 22, 2016 at 11:51 AM Carmine, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv ~LINDA~

Dineen Williams Gault February 21, 2016 at 6:19 PM I felt your out of body, no this can't be, description of heartbreak. Well written piece.