I Falter Too

i love you but i falter too! Time to time i used to lose,
momentum but now shifting in rhythm observe this
potential its exponential, if you mine you mind's,
connection to divine these eyes will open in time,
follow your own grind cause i'd never waste my own
time, unless i scheduled it to remind,
that we are a part of divine,
though we seem far entwined this very present
brought by language seems fine.
and the scars on our thighs, no longer waist high,
no misery we hide, a pride thats bottled up in divide,
wonder for life, we searched and found right,
and for all the trip was live, cause every morning,
four till five, though i cherish it now, as clouds i sprawl,
to see you after-all, you're the reason i called, 
could life be involved?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 13, 2016 at 3:25 AM
"that we are part of divine" That line is powerful all on its own. I don't think anyone can read this eloquent, beautiful, profoundly true poem without stopping to think about all the sweet intricacies of love, life and our place in the greater meaning of it all. Excellent poem, my friend.
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