Dinda Minardi Poet Couplet

I Fall In the Fall

I Fall in the Fall

(03/10/2011)

It was between dry and rainy 
season here
When you breathed early fall’s 
weather sphere

Love visits in a weird way
When you were far, I had nothing 
to say

Now you almost near, I think I 
jump my heart
Is this really a good start or only 
cupid's random dart?

You make me hold my breath, dear
When you suddenly appeared, I 
cried a tear

The intimacy communicates with 
my feeling
My heart’s fence starts crackling

I’m asking about fall, you’re 
giggling
Never mind, as you’re here, I can 
feel the leaves falling


By: Dinda Minardi

Inspired by Michael J. Falotico's 
contest 'Falling in Love in the Fall'

Submitted for Nathan D. - "Best of 
the Best - Poem" Contest.

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Poet Destroyer A October 26, 2011 at 6:50 PM How I wish.. fall would make me fall... He he he... Very cute... Hope u did well in the contest... P.d Dinda Minardi November 17, 2011 at 9:29 AM Thanks, dear P.D. :) Poet Destroyer A October 26, 2011 at 6:54 PM Wait... I see u did well in the contest... Congrats..

Elizabeth Wesley October 12, 2011 at 8:07 PM That last line is so special, it gives a great conclusion to your special verse.

Audrey Haick October 8, 2011 at 8:37 PM A very lovely poem, Dinda. Congratulations on a deserving win in Michael's Contest. Love, Annalise

Michael J. Falotico October 7, 2011 at 4:41 PM My dear sweet Dinda you have spilled your heart through out this wonderful piece..... congrat my dear,,,,luv Michael

Joe Maverick October 7, 2011 at 4:30 PM Congratulations on the win here Dinda..

Carol Sunshine Brown October 7, 2011 at 7:58 AM Congratulations on your win in Michael's "Falling in Love in the Fall" contest Dinda. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage October 7, 2011 at 12:04 AM Lovely poetry, I must apologize for taking so long to congratulate you but i have been having problems with my internet and also with ps down, I am really delayed. My apologies. Lee

Cory Long October 6, 2011 at 3:42 PM congrats on your win in the contest. free spirit

Black Eyed Susan October 6, 2011 at 1:33 PM Congratulations on your win dinda! i like how your hearts fence starts cracking and how you can feel the leaves falling :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 6, 2011 at 12:03 AM Congrats Dinda on an exciting win with this brilliant beauty of outstanding expressions..luv.. superbly penned..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown October 5, 2011 at 8:04 AM I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Dinda. Love, Carol