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I Fall

Cleaned and shaved thinking that’ll do out and about running blue Tempted by the light that natures gives Beckons to heal my soul - to no avail An empty course flies through my veins  Little left to guide me sane Depressed in the light of day Chained to darkness wrath’s, I lay prey Escape my reality, with smiles on my face - to have the weight of reality way in - Heavy hearted I fall

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Date: 11/22/2020 10:21:00 AM
Awe, sad but beautifully written...
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Paul Murray
Date: 11/22/2020 11:46:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 11/21/2020 5:52:00 PM
Paul, I read and appreciated what you had to say in this poem. Keep writing; keep sharing!
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Paul Murray
Date: 11/21/2020 7:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Life in itself brings words forward to self express
Date: 11/21/2020 4:11:00 PM
“Little left to guide me sane” - great line!
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Paul Murray
Date: 11/21/2020 7:23:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 11/21/2020 1:51:00 PM
Deeply sad...
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Paul Murray
Date: 11/21/2020 7:23:00 PM
You felt it Thank you

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