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I Failed Her...

I loved her from the start, so I thought 'til death do us part. But little did I know that she had other plans. Plans that my heart couldn't withstand. Those words that tortured my soul, and caused my heart to have a emtpy hole. "I think we should take some time off", is what she said. Now I sleep uncomfortably as I lay down in my bed. It's been awhile now, and I haven't heard from you. Is it that you feel my spirit too ? Am I causing you to cry so that the tears will make everything become a blur ? And that question made me realize that I failed her...

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Date: 6/29/2010 9:59:00 AM
This poem flows very well and tells a story. I like the rhyming pattern and the spark it give the poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/28/2010 6:54:00 PM
Sad and I love that in the write the person realizes that they did wrong,, in most cases it's denial that falls in,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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