I Exist---

Someone hear me,
 someone cheer me,
Someone tell them i exist...
 SO what I am a crawler,
SO what I can't sing louder..
 I am not dead yet,
     Tell them I exist....

Many sins I have done,
 Either by mistake OR for fun..
Weight of my demon days
 drowning me into the ground..
SO what I am studded deep,
 I am still making sound...
SO what it's just a '"hiss'" 

I am not dead yet
        Tell them I exist...
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