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I Empty the Night You Rise the Sun

I EMPTY THE NIGHT, YOU RISE THE SUN Roaming in romantic aroma I sank into self-made illusion, Too confused in wobbling dilemma. On the axis through heart and soul spinning my hesitant emotion. As you were playing an inert role, my ardent ardor might end in dream. At last my desire touched your passion. Now I will taste love in full cream. I empty the night, you rise the Sun Rhyme scheme A-B-A-C-B-C-D-B-D-B 06/10/18 Rhyme Time 4-10 Lines Contest by Laura Loo.

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Date: 6/30/2018 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Anisha, on your great 3rd place win.. Lovely poem Hugs Eve ~`*
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 6/30/2018 10:35:00 PM
Thanks n love.
Date: 6/29/2018 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Anisha - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 6/30/2018 10:35:00 PM
Thanks. Peace n joy
Date: 6/29/2018 7:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done! :)
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Date: 6/29/2018 7:08:00 AM
beautiful poem from a beautiful lady, really enjoyed this sweet Anisha...thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :)
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Date: 6/12/2018 2:59:00 AM
Excellent my dear
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Date: 6/11/2018 2:54:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, so profound and touching...
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