Anisha Dutta Poet Rhyme

I Empty the Night You Rise the Sun

I EMPTY THE NIGHT, YOU RISE THE SUN

                   Roaming in romantic aroma
                    I sank into self-made illusion,
                   Too confused in wobbling dilemma.
                  On the axis through heart and soul
                 spinning my hesitant emotion.
                As you were playing an inert role,
                my ardent ardor might end in dream.
                 At last my desire touched your passion.
                Now I will taste love in full cream.
                I empty the night, you rise the Sun

   Rhyme scheme A-B-A-C-B-C-D-B-D-B

    06/10/18

   Rhyme Time 4-10 Lines Contest by Laura Loo.

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Eve Roper June 30, 2018 at 11:20 AM Congratulations, Anisha, on your great 3rd place win.. Lovely poem Hugs Eve ~`* Anisha Dutta June 30, 2018 at 10:35 PM Thanks n love.

Gregory Richard Barden June 29, 2018 at 9:52 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win, Anisha - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-) Anisha Dutta June 30, 2018 at 10:35 PM Thanks. Peace n joy

Susan Gentry June 29, 2018 at 7:29 PM Congratulations on your win. Well done! :)

Beautiful Scars June 29, 2018 at 7:08 AM beautiful poem from a beautiful lady, really enjoyed this sweet Anisha...thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :)

Al Juman June 12, 2018 at 2:59 AM Excellent my dear

Harry Horsman June 11, 2018 at 2:54 PM Beautiful poetry, so profound and touching...