I Empty the Night, You Rise the Sun

 
I EMPTY THE NIGHT, YOU RISE THE SUN
The dense darkness of the star starved night stayed petrified in stony niche of my mind bare, I kept accreting layers so long out of your sight until the time came for my passionate horizon to melt it in desolate night’s cauldron of despair that flowed searching a place in the heart of dawn, I found unveiled, lighted by the sun raised by you my nascent sky is colored in motif of your astral flair. The empty mind, now hued, grows wings of love new, a bird from depth of dark I fly in your shimmering air.
June 10, 2018
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Roper Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations, Subimal, on your great 1st place win. love your imagery of your verse. Lovely poem Hugs Eve ~`*
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 4:01 AM
Thank you, Eve for your nice comments.
Barden Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 9:40 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Subimal - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 4:01 AM
Thank you, Greg.
Gentry Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this beautifully written poem. Enjoyed it. :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 4:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Gentry Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this beautifully written poem. Enjoyed it. :)
Dutta Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 1:22 PM
BIG CONGRATS.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 3:59 AM
Thank you.
Scars Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 6:50 AM
absolutely loved this sweet Subimal, you rise the sun with this poem, thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 3:59 AM
Thank you so much, Laura for the placement.
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