I Drink of Life

I drink of Life
Of lavish beauty
Consuming its fragility 

I drink of Death
From which I flee
And cheat with immortality

I drink of pain
Its utter grief
And spew out my humanity

I drink of time
Of frozen bliss
And Change’s continuity

I drink of love
And drag it deep
For it is my serenity




© Donna Golden; December 25, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 9:30 PM
DONNA, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
Ryerson Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 3:28 AM
One thing that makes this so compelling is your method of starting each verse with 'I drink of'---- More please...
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 5:20 PM
this is really good, Donna. Maybe I read it before, I am not sure, but I think you did a great poem for your first one posted in a while!!
Chutani Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 9:53 AM
simple yet deep and universal. congratulations for top placement. Mohan
Golden Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Thank you, Mohan!
Smith Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 1:10 PM
Ingenious interpretation pared with stunning poetry... Congrats on a much deserved top win!! Hugs, my friend.. Arlene
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 6:06 AM
whatta interpretation.. witty!!! deserving win!! COngrats! :D HAppy NEw year! :)
Guzzi Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 7:38 PM
Nice work for a difficult theme. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 5:45 AM
In enjoyed this magical poem , congrats on the win, Donna
A   Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 11:49 PM
Donna, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 7:04 PM
congratulations Donna on your win,so pure and well written
Mohn Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 7:00 PM
This is magic...and darn good writing...big congrats on your win
Jerden Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:41 PM
Way to return with a bang! Congratulations! Hope you stick around for a while this time...
Golden Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 7:10 PM
"sparked"
Golden Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, Roy! What an honor you have given to me! Thank you for hosting this contest which spared my inspiration anew!
Sietesantos Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:38 PM
Excellent piece - very beautiful and inspirational! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Pandita
Callus Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 1:33 PM
#7 A unique take on this subject, Donna; very clever. A very merited top placing...congratulations. All the best for the new year. // paul
Anderson Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Congrats! Great write!
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:33 AM
I love the way you concluded this, congrats on the win Donna...huggs
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:13 AM
Many congrats on your win Donna:-) Hugs Jan xxx
May Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 9:53 AM
Congrats on a great win
Yvonne Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations on your first place win.
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January 2, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Beautiful Donna... Congrats on your first place win... Verlena
Fleming Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 1:49 AM
This is an excellent poem! The best i have read today! Demonstrates creativeness and originality...very good!! :) john.
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