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I Dreamt About You

your short pleated skirt
is out of date long ago…
oh old fashion dreams

31.05.2019
Writing Challenge 5, May 2019, Senryu Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Dear Heart

Copyright © Kurt Ravidas | Year Posted 2019

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

July 12, 2019 at 12:26 PM

So nice write!

July 12, 2019 at 12:47 PM

Thanks, Abdullah. You're welcome. Pls, come again)

Constance La France

June 10, 2019 at 6:43 PM

Kurt, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu ~

July 12, 2019 at 12:46 PM

Thank you, dear Heart. My best wishes to you and your contests)

Andrea Dietrich

June 10, 2019 at 3:59 PM

Congrats. I enjoyed seeing this one again.

June 3, 2019 at 5:13 PM

Fashion does not equal passion... :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

June 1, 2019 at 3:58 PM

but i bet the feelings never grow old! Nicely done!

June 2, 2019 at 4:52 AM

Thanks, Andrea)

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 31, 2019 at 2:02 PM

- ... young dreams ... never get old fashion, Kurt :) - Lovely :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

May 31, 2019 at 3:03 PM

Thank you, Sunshine)

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