Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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I Dreamt

i dreamt
i was a bumblebee

wild and carefree
frivolous and playful
dancing up
a summer breeze
flirting with the sun

a wanderer a drifter
tipsy drunk on perfumes
enticing and alluring
irrevocably seduced
in a sea of temptresses



Published in my 24-page photo book ~I DREAMT~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on December 27, 2018 for contest END 2018 STANDARD sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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Jenifer Jeyaseelan December 27, 2018 at 3:20 AM What a jolly life, enjoying the sweet nature.....nice poem

Caren Krutsinger December 27, 2018 at 12:04 AM I want to go dancing and flirting through the yonder meadows with you, Line. This sounds delightful on a day where it is BRRRR cold outside. Line Gauthier December 27, 2018 at 12:06 AM LOL Perfect weather for dreaming of summer meadows, Caren.

Gershon Wolf December 26, 2018 at 10:03 PM So visual. Love it. Oh, to be 'radiant and free.' So nicely penned, Line. :) gw Line Gauthier December 26, 2018 at 10:47 PM Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire December 26, 2018 at 5:45 PM Love it "frolicking in yonder meadows" Fab! Line Gauthier December 26, 2018 at 9:19 PM Thanks, TImothy. Much appreciated.

Heidi Sands December 26, 2018 at 4:22 PM Beautifully written. I enjoyed this :) Line Gauthier December 26, 2018 at 4:46 PM Thanks, Heidi. Most appreciated.