Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

I Dreamed Christmas In the Skies

I dreamed Christmas in the skies,
puffy clouds with images of good tidings.
Better than plum pudding surprise,
the nativity - God with us abiding.

Perhaps this was the Christmas star,
a close-up, magnification, of its sight.
Wise men on bumpy camels from afar.
Shepherds heralded by angelic light.

The key, to life and death, in a manger.
Surely his eyes’ bright and smile’s sweet.
His nemesis, the devil, friends with danger.
This Babe will divide the tares from the wheat.

I dreamed Christmas in the snowy clouds.
The gift of heaven to a child filled with wonder.
I rode on a fantastical sleigh and sighed aloud,
awestruck as the star Jesus sleeps under.

12/19/2021

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Caren Krutsinger December 28, 2021 at 4:29 AM "This Babe will divide the tares from the wheat." - sure will! Kim Rodrigues December 28, 2021 at 11:33 AM Yes! Blessings in the New Year, sweet sweet friend!

Lindsay Laurie December 21, 2021 at 4:56 PM Hello Kim ... to look up and dream of the true Christmas spirit should dominate the commercializing we are bombarded with on earth - thank you Kim - Lindsay Kim Rodrigues December 22, 2021 at 9:32 PM Thank you! Merry Christmas!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 21, 2021 at 12:33 PM - A dreamily beautiful poem, Kim :) - I wish you a wonderful Christmas and a blessed happy new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues December 22, 2021 at 9:33 PM And to you too! Thank you, sweet Anne-Lise!

Alexis Y. December 20, 2021 at 5:12 PM Hi Kim, This was a good poem to read, so apt for the Christmas season. Your faith shines bright in this well written spiritual write:-) Alexis Kim Rodrigues December 22, 2021 at 9:33 PM Thank you, Alexis! Merry Christmas!

Alkas Poetry December 20, 2021 at 4:54 AM Magnifique dear Kim, a merry christmas that is what i wish, peace and happiness, hugs, salute alkas Kim Rodrigues December 22, 2021 at 9:33 PM And all to you too, Alkas!

Victor Buhagiar December 20, 2021 at 4:00 AM That is because you are an angel. You admire nativity from above singing with choirs of bliss. Happy Christmas. Kim Rodrigues December 22, 2021 at 9:34 PM Thank you so much, my friend! Happy Christmas!

Jennifer Proxenos December 20, 2021 at 3:08 AM This is a Christmas joy to read a masterpiece you have created Kim of the glory and faith of the Babe in the manger Kudos my friend love and hugs Jennifer Kim Rodrigues December 22, 2021 at 9:34 PM Thank you, Jennifer! Merry Christmas!

Gershon Wolf December 19, 2021 at 6:32 PM Truly delightful, lovely Christmas dream-poem, Kim. Joy of the Season, gw Kim Rodrigues December 19, 2021 at 6:41 PM Thank you! Blessings of joy for your holidays!

Darlene De Beaulieu December 19, 2021 at 4:08 PM Hello Kim, a beautiful dream you had. A wonderful Christmas poem. Merry Christmas. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu December 20, 2021 at 11:45 AM Hello Kim, you are welcome. merry Christmas. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues December 19, 2021 at 6:42 PM Thank you, Darlene! Merry Christmas!

Joseph P. DiMino December 19, 2021 at 2:03 PM Wow! Stunning work. Wishing you Light and Love. Merry Christmas my friend. Outstanding write. I am going to ask Santa, to let me write at least half as well as Kim. I would be overjoyed. Love it! Kim Rodrigues December 19, 2021 at 6:42 PM You are so sweet, Joe! Merry Christmas!