I Dreamed a Dream

I dreamed a dream
My home's closing door slammed
To sound of silent regrets
And slowly you slipped to oblivion
My hope is the deserted room
With crumbled petals from broken vase strewn
Dust accumulated
Has enveloped my once
Glowing face
Sobbing tears of unsaid words
Are hanging in sorrows' frame
Silhouettes of yesterdays
Breathing last on torn plasters of wall
Dark has unpacked bags in my room
And raindrops have forever forgotten my doorsill
For they fail to recall 
Our duets that we sung
Holding them plentiful in our palms
My bottom has fallen further to immeasurable distance
And my roofs have curled their arms
I tried and tried
But without shackles my chained limbs
Failed to hold on
My beams have met their destiny
They are part of archaic stories
My dream is somewhere stuck in wooden clock
It's hours hand 
Easy prey of termites 
Lost existence

18/02/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/21/2019 3:07:00 AM
- Our dreams are often sensitive and difficult and understand - Congratulations on your winning poem, Purbasha :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 2/21/2019 3:09:00 AM
Thank you for your wishes.
Date: 2/20/2019 5:15:00 PM
I have read your dream and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 2/20/2019 9:25:00 PM
Thank you.Happy to receive your wishes.
Date: 2/20/2019 3:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Purbasha..you write wonderful poems!
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 2/20/2019 9:23:00 PM
Thank you.Not all my poems are great,but I guess that's the way we learn.
Date: 2/20/2019 2:22:00 PM
My dream is somewhere stuck in a wooden clock.. what great last three lines.. great poem Purbasha.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 2/20/2019 9:22:00 PM
Thank you for the placement.Humbled and happy!
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